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[~Legend In The Making~ Pt. 2]

lyrics and review

NOTE TO REVIEWERS/EDITORS: NOTHING IN THIS SUBMISSION IS INTENDED TO OFFEND ANYONE OR THE ARTIST OF THIS PIECE, I MERELY OFFERED MY FREEDOM OF SPEECH LYRICS THAT COULD GO WITH THE SONG, APOLOGIES TO ANYONE IF I BROKE ANY RULES OR OFFENDED ANYONE PLEASE DON'T DELETE MY ACCOUNT.

:09 everybody in the place stand up! (echo fadeout stand up till "productions" comes in)
:23 you get up you get down
you get geeked you come round
like faggot mother fucker got yo ass underground
(like a pimp) [echoed]
now i'm talkin to the crowd
(like a pimp) [echoed]
now ya betta bow down
go straight to the streets
all you posers go home
if you thought you ran the game by now ya you
know you on yo own (on yo own)
now i'm jackin ya i'm jackin ya
now i'm crackin ya i'm crackin ya
(will send the rest later)- if you like i'll make a sample and send it to u via email, if not, its all good-

love the beat- i think its really good cuz it sounds professional- love the synths- reminds me of lil jon and my motif6 haha. what do you use? i like the whole thing in general and think you could go very far.

-DJOXY-

Bleek989 responds:

yea that shit was tight bro
and thanks for the review. prly best one ive ever had on here lol
but umm i be usin just FL studio mane. for all my shit.
check the rest of my shit out and hit me up

www.myspace.com/locashproduktionz

[8-Bit Hip Hop by scm]

good approach, yet lacking...

its a great song/beat however i think yyou need to find your place. i like your sounds for the 8-bit feel you really captured this perfectly good job! i like the idea of mashing a bunch of diff sounds together in defferent sections so the listener gets a feel for all your stuff, but i think it should be done in a different manner, instead of an actual song itself. good work and love the build up of beat+sounds . i'll be listening for you down the road when i can!

-DJOXY-

ZombieArmyAudioTeam responds:

Thanks for the response! This is my first attempt at doing anything 8-bit and hip hop as well so thanks for the feedback!

[[DJFear] Medium Mix]

NIICE!

love the intro and combo of sounds you used- really catchy and like how you didn't go full-blown into the dance beat right away you built it up. its simple but mad catchy and good for something like castle crashers !- nice stuff

2nd mix- its ok, but i think you went about it the wrong way by just starting full-blown every sound all in. i don't like the 2nd tune cuz its not catchy enough for me and doesn't seem to go anywhere- i think the sounds yu used are good, but the final message is lacking. the end sound is really cool- if i were you i'd add arppegios and a stronger melody that stuck through the whole piece, instead of 2 or 3 separate themes

-DJOXY-

FearlessKon responds:

Thank you VERY much for the advice, ill work on them more

[*Time Traveller*]

not quite a download

like the idea, i think with a few more days on this track, it would truly be epic. but what i don't like about it is the suttleness and lack of punch. i think you should have worked on really makiing it stand out from the rest- the beats are PERFECT, but not strong enough and not different enough- i love the half time part though how you turned it into a dnb w/ hip hop beats thrown in there- really cool!- like the sounds you used but again , i think you should have thrown in more stuff that made it stand out.

-DJOXY-

Jenni-Harry4eva3 responds:

Oohs. Well thanks for tips! Yeah, the beats are due to the mixing, and I'd add more. I'll probably get around to doing this over again, but not now. Thanks though.

[:THV:]

NIICE!

LOVE the pulse hardcore relentless pounding in there! the only thing i think is you made it WAY too intense so it distorted, unless my little desktop speakers just cant handle the (((BASS))) haha- great tune here i think you could really make some cool stuff if you spent a while on it

-DJOXY-

I-Saved-The-World responds:

thanks :) i appreciate the comments <3

[More And More]

love the vocals!

not the most moving vocals but its a 9/10 for vocals. for the trance song itself, i give it an 8, and for the transitions /intro/outro i give it a 7 cuz its kinda simple transitions and nothing too elaborate or creative on the intro/outro/effects side of things.-- you did a really good job and think you should keep up the work!

-DJOXY-

AndreaDigita responds:

Haha, this is pretty weird, ppl are either loving or completely hating the vocals, dunno why :P

Thanks for the comment ^^

[SN |Lost, But on Her Way| SN]

one word, amazing

are you an ameature artist? your song sounds like you spent weeks on this - multiple hundreds of hours - MAD impressive- much would like to hear more- perfect setup and feel- great beat, great melody and background sounds/ambient waves. love the piano thing in there (main melody)

-DJOXY-

SessileNomad responds:

idk if im exaclty amature but im def. not a professional

i probably spent more time on this song than any other song ive ever made

glad you liked it though

thanks for the review

[Neverland [SyM Final Remix]]

nice feel, great emotion

the vocals really add to the song making it stand out from everyday trance- SMART-- i like the twinkle approach you used for the cute feel it gives it- very appropriate for your genre. you did a GREAT job on the buildup w/ the background synths and drum fills. i like @ about 2:50 the new synth melody its like the "finale" great tune, i'd add more catchy vocals to your next song though. what song is it originally though? the vocal portion that is

-DJOXY-

syphonmax responds:

The vocals are complete and the original song is Kate Lesing Neverland, there is a remix pack out and these are the complete vocals you get so there wasn't a lot to work with

[2nd Storm(Newgrounds cut)]

2nd Storm

nice dance mix here- i like the overall feel. you added alot of really strong synth sounds i think could get you a spot in more than just the top5 of newgrounds haha!- keep up the good work and promote your full version, i think that would attract your true fans. the only thing i have a problem with is that it sounds like WAY too much of the generic trance out there that doesn't stand out for anything- that's the only problem if you were to put it up there w/ the main dance music for ratings- for newgrounds i give it a 7, for the general dance community, i give it a 3 cuz its a totally fine track, but it laccks uniqueness which i think with more work would def stand out.

-DJOXY-

EOT responds:

I can't disagree with anything that you say! :P The problem with the full version is that it is way over 8mb...